Free Fiction Thursday – Peaches

Howdy, Internets!

Boy, I get back from a cool, jam-packed with information ten days on the Oregon coast only to be swamped with work at the day job. I guess I was missed. *g*

Anyway, enough with the nattering. This week’s Free Fiction Thursday story features another one of my Kris Sparks stories, Peaches.


Kris Sparks

Published by Thunder Valley Press

Copyright 2011 by Kris Sparks


They met at lunchtime in a busy noontime Saturday line at Subway.  Henry ordered roast beef on sourdough, Marianne turkey and provolone on whole wheat, no oil or mayonnaise.

For years afterward he remembered the smells of that day — the rich yeast of bread fresh from the warmer, the campfire aroma of the smoky provolone, the sharp vinegar tang of pickles and hot peppers.  The motorcycle rider in dusty leathers in the line behind Henry reeked of sweat, cigarettes, and stale beer.  But most of all, he remembered the feminine smell of her perfume.  Subtle, but there.  It made him notice her.

He stood in line behind her looking at the back of her neck.  Did she wear her perfume there?  Perhaps a dab behind each ear.  His mother had done that.  He remembered when he was little watching his mother at her dressing table as she took the stopper out of a cut crystal bottle and dabbed the wet end of the stopper behind each ear.  The crystal was clear glass, but the end of the stopper was rough and opaque.

For the longest time he’d thought the perfume had eaten away the glass, and that’s why the stopper was rough.  Funny the things you remember.

He’d never known the name of the perfume his mother used.  She was gone long before he was old enough to think to ask.

Ahead of them in line a young woman held a toddler in her arms.  Boy?  Girl?  He couldn’t tell.  The child was dressed in one of those unisex outfits, neither pink nor blue but shades of green and red and yellow, like a street light.  The child smiled at him, the kind of sweet, innocent smile only young children can give.  He smiled back.  The child laughed and pointed a chubby finger at him.  He chuckled and waved the tips of his fingers.

The woman with intriguing perfume turned around and looked at him.  “She likes you,” she said.

The woman was young, younger than his own twenty-eight.  Her skin was smooth and gently tan, and her dark hair cut in short curls that hugged her face.  Her eyes were vivid blue.  Was that how she knew the child was a girl?  Could she see things with those eyes he couldn’t?

(read the rest of the story here)

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